tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6472050772782545089.post1905588176819358351..comments2023-10-21T05:22:53.166-05:00Comments on Poetry, Music, and Real Life: A poem on death.Peterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05972480722494170701noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6472050772782545089.post-15521190995455787082011-08-31T22:43:40.905-05:002011-08-31T22:43:40.905-05:00I like. You are a good witter, in my very humble o...I like. You are a good witter, in my very humble opinion.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15867863285284472937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6472050772782545089.post-82663144027223071752011-08-20T01:14:18.627-05:002011-08-20T01:14:18.627-05:00Es good. Especially the last line.
Here's one...Es good. Especially the last line.<br /><br />Here's one I should have written to bug my teacher in my creative writing class.<br /><br />Roses are red<br />Violets are blue<br />I need something<br />better to do<br /><br />Keep writing!N8 T8https://www.blogger.com/profile/16659090683374991687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6472050772782545089.post-76937877296298075012011-08-18T22:21:49.558-05:002011-08-18T22:21:49.558-05:00i like it. i would like to hear it read aloud, tho...i like it. i would like to hear it read aloud, though, so i could get a better handle on the metre. you paint good word pictures, though. write more. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com